Amazingly, scientists at the Walters Planetarium have discovered a new star on the horizon. As the lead investigator on the team, you have the honor of naming the star.
What will it be called? What does it look like? What type of physical characteristics does it possess? On your post, name this unique object and then describe it using vivid adjectives and active verbs.
Example:
Kyrial: An orange glow radiates from its rocky surface. Through the hazy outer layers of its thick atmosphere, tiny rays of light flicker from cliffs of towering quartz.
Anon: A red glow shines across all the bright stars. Anon has a rocky bumpy surface, but on its other half its softer than a babys bottom.
ReplyDeletegood good job job!!
DeleteMaximo this is not an effective "grow". You must explain what was so good about this post.
DeleteSolis:I feel it's radiant glow against my skin as it rises from the edge of an endless sea.oyu see the marveloues beauty of it marbled surface. Red,yellow and orange collide to make a marvelous ball of fire.
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Laura I like the name you put on your star. I also like the way you described the glow of your star. I loved the way you used vivid verbs.
DeleteI would name the star Gamene. It is bright shining all the colors. Gamene has a crystal surface. It has a great glowing view. It romes around space really fast.
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ReplyDeleteThe KD Star:It glows blue at the atmosphere.it looks smooth.if you look at it it will make you the best basketball player ever.it glows at night and rest at day like an owl.
ReplyDeleteThe Lebron Star
Deletereally man but nice i already looked at that star lol
DeleteTalitha: The star will SHINE BRIGHT LIKE A DIAMOND! It will possess the trait of glowing a rainbow of neon colors into the calm ocean of Earth.Also, Talitha will rise into the moonlight and give light to the vivid city of NY. :)
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I liked how you used a simile
DeleteZerecto: The Star Of hope will shine bright when all seem to be coming to an end. It points on it's diamond like shape will glaze like a very lucent sun. It'll be seen all over the world and reward those with a pure soul/heart, and will light up the darkest of place.
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Great job!!!!
DeleteReally great!!!
DeleteI like you stars name
DeleteGreat Job !! I like the star's name and the way You described it >
DeleteApocalypto: The star represents darkness because of its eerie glow. The way its isolated on one side of space makes you feel lonely at times. It's easy to detect because of the lack of stars around it and one of the most peculiar things of all is that there will supposably be a moment when all the planets align around the star and it will erupt which will lead to the end of the world!
ReplyDeleteReally end of the world?
DeleteYou did a good job describing your star , i liked how you set the mood
nice one bro
DeleteJuju: the star represents light because of its glowing color. It travels threw space with beaming lights shooting out illuminating the horizon
ReplyDeletesapphire: the star looks like a pentagon and is very vivid that has a green spark to it. the star is so small but yet emerges to the lightest of all stars. it has a soft surface. legend has it that who ever sees it gets a wish and its seen once evey 200 years
ReplyDeleteKristal: The star shines bright like a diomand and the colors are extremly vivid. The star would make people jovial unlike most squalor nights. The star is only seen in climate places of the world and most people get very paranoid at night about this secret star but dont know if this star is real or not but legend has it that this star comes if people beleive. :)
ReplyDeleteBobby Joe:This star is not that bright its just there normal not trying to be no extra he is normal ...He is seen in any weather no special weather needed to see him is was born when a normal person is born he is only seen by normal people living normal lives,so in other words nobody sees him.
ReplyDeleteBrightzum: The brightest star on the whole universe will be able to change her color every 20 minutes during the night. It'll be the brightest star you'll ever see on your whole life. Everybody would be able to see it and be amazed by her unique colors and brightness.
ReplyDeletekim;Shines a ray of blue light all over the galexy. its surface is rough and bumpy also kim oly comes out evey two months.it is very bright vivid color blue shines
ReplyDeleteRosemarie : she shines bright but not like the others . She is like a crystal but her beautiful color reflects off of the moon , she tends to turn into vivid bright colors such as a very light blue and purple but only when its night .
ReplyDeleteI like the way the author gave me a visual image of the place he/she was.
ReplyDeleteBluejam: Shines different dhades of vivid blue under the night sky. Its surface is a as smooth as a babays butt with rough edges on its tip. He tends to be very cordial when he turns on his night blue shade. But when he turns on his light blue shade he is not as cordial.
ReplyDeleteExocity: this star shines in many different colors.This star looks like a triangle but the tips of the star in more longer.
ReplyDeleteThis star leaves people dumbfounded. It appears annually for two weeks in the black night sky. This star was the foundation for an ancient civilization that relied on its luminous glow to signal the summer harvest. It emits liquid that glows vivid shades of indigo. Its name is ursa.
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This star is beautiful like the night sky. It only appears 1 every thousand years and when it appears it leaves a trail of darkness.
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