Thursday, May 16, 2013

Circular Poetry!!!

In a lyric poem, sensory details musically work together to convey an emotional experience.
Along the shore, seashells gather until the tide takes them back to sea.

One such seashell is called the "Nautilus".  This delicate creature began life in a tiny room that it built around itself.  As it continued to grow, it built larger rooms that gradually wond their way around and around that first small room.

Early American Poet Oliver Wendell Holmes wrote about this interesting sea creatures in his poem, " The Chambered Nautilus."  Eventually, the creature slips from the last chamber, and empty shelll is left behind.  The powm infers that, as we grow, we also  move forward, becoming a new person; we can't relieve the past.

In today's challenge, create a short lyric poem that gives advice or offers a special insight into life.  On your W.A.L.L. begin brainstorming the topic, rhyme scheme, and words you will be weaving together.

If you get stuck on the topic, think of another natural element (the trees in the fall, tiny grains of sand, eagles, earthworms, even mosquitoes).  Finally, pull your ideas together to create a first draft.


EXAMPLE:
107. The Chambered Nautilus


THIS is the ship of pearl, which, poets feign,

    Sails the unshadowed main,—

    The venturous bark that flings

On the sweet summer wind its purpled wings

In gulfs enchanted, where the Siren sings,
    And coral reefs lie bare,

Where the cold sea-maids rise to sun their streaming hair.

  
Its webs of living gauze no more unfurl;

    Wrecked is the ship of pearl!

    And every chambered cell,
Where its dim dreaming life was wont to dwell,

As the frail tenant shaped his growing shell,

    Before thee lies revealed,—

Its irised ceiling rent, its sunless crypt unsealed!

  
Year after year beheld the silent toil
    That spread his lustrous coil;

    Still, as the spiral grew,

He left the past year's dwelling for the new,

Stole with soft step its shining archway through,

    Built up its idle door,
Stretched in his last-found home, and knew the old no more.

  
Thanks for the heavenly message brought by thee,

    Child of the wandering sea,

    Cast from her lap, forlorn!

From thy dead lips a clearer note is born
Than ever Triton blew from wreathèd horn!

    While on mine ear it rings,

Through the deep caves of thought I hear a voice that sings:—

  
Build thee more stately mansions, O my soul,

    As the swift seasons roll!
    Leave thy low-vaulted past!

Let each new temple, nobler than the last,

Shut thee from heaven with a dome more vast,

    Till thou at length art free,

Leaving thine outgrown shell by life's unresting sea!



9 comments:

  1. The sight of a heart makes me bare no longer
    Walking through the barren night
    He comes up to mind
    Looking past the river his reflection comes
    to image

    I touch the water feeling his last expression
    Still I feel so angry of what had to become
    The thought of no longer seeing him
    has made me hate myself

    Looking down he must forgive me
    Feeling his lost has made a new light
    awaken from me
    So farewell.... but no dounbt I still
    cared for you

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  2. The Cave of Darkness
    While the sunlight's out theirs a darkness in that cave
    People are frightened and scared to go near that cave
    They say that suicidal spirits live their

    Filled with darkness , filled with people who couldn't take it anymore
    The cave of darkness
    When the sunlight's out the spirits are putting together their plan

    Just let the night it and watch these spirits rush out of their cave feeling free feeling no hurt and letting go

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  3. Look into the deep side of your heart,
    For what, the person you trust lives inside,
    Raising a hand to give them a high five,
    Encouraging them to never let go.

    For who could the trusted person be?
    A close friend or loved one?
    Creating an eternal atmosphere,
    For which they brought will never die.

    Once you find the one true to your heart
    The way you two love will never part
    Like a river or a pond that has no end



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  4. Why Do We Love?
    Is It Because Yolo?
    "You Only Love Once"
    Hahaha
    NO, Yes..Maybe....

    Confused Im Not
    I Know What I Want
    Ohh Snap That Rhymed
    And now i Cry

    Im really Sad
    For I Have Failed
    To Please The One I love
    But One Promise That i keep is my heart will not be veiled

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  5. A tree, tall and strong, stands well above all other trees
    Looking down to those inferior to him
    He laughs in astonishment of how little they seem

    Under a tree tall and strong that stands well above all other trees all the other tress stare up in sympathy for this tree that so tall and strong and stands way over the other trees but yet stand up there all alone ,that’s all they see.

    As clouds appear above this tree so tall and strong and way above all other trees, the tree weeps of thought that he’s all alone.
    He stares down at the other trees and cry because they have each other

    why should a tree be so tall and strong and stand above all other trees if the tree feels empty and fragile as though is bark peels and releases its vulnerability

    So as the tree so tall and strong, who stands above all other trees, weeps
    And the rain drops to all the other tress,
    The tree realizes he doesn’t want to be so tall and strong and stand above all other trees if it means that he’s the only tall and strong tree up there

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  6. My name is Allen.
    Sometimes sunny and sometimes rainy, not sure what i'm feeling.
    One day as bright as the sun, the next a dark stormy day.

    I remember the time I was excited for summer to come and school to be over,
    but that was before I found out that I was going to summer school. My feelings begins bright then ends dark.

    I'm just not sure why I feel this way.
    I didn't do anything wrong.
    So I thought that it was just the way of life.
    Therefore I new that it was normal.

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  7. Far into the horizon, I saw him wave
    His eyes told me the story of a farewell
    My face told him the story of
    my anguish experience
    Can't live without him
    Can't liv ewithout him

    I mourn to and from the narrow
    distance in between our soul
    Now i walk through the shadows
    and away from the sun
    cant live withot him
    cant live without him

    I try to be brave and not to cry
    But tears fall from side to side
    As he waves goodbye my heart
    sinks beneath the ground
    Maybe one day he will come back

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  8. The Fountain of Youth

    I see something in the dark forest
    Not even the most courageous knights would enter
    Let alone my elderly self
    My age is my tormentor
    I look worse than an elf

    I have a feeling that something good will come
    If i enter the deadly forest
    I've heard rumors of a fountain
    A fountain that will make someone young

    I have to make a decison
    Should I look for youth and get hurt on the way
    Or stay here and die slowly
    Oh how much do I miss my youth
    But is it worth getting my elderly self in danger

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  9. LIFE, believe, is not a dream
    So dark as sages say;
    Oft a little morning rain
    Foretells a pleasant day.
    Sometimes there are clouds of gloom,
    But these are transient all;
    If the shower will make the roses bloom,
    O why lament its fall ?

    Rapidly, merrily,
    Life's sunny hours flit by,
    Gratefully, cheerily,
    Enjoy them as they fly !

    What though Death at times steps in
    And calls our Best away ?
    What though sorrow seems to win,
    O'er hope, a heavy sway ?
    Yet hope again elastic springs,
    Unconquered, though she fell;
    Still buoyant are her golden wings,
    Still strong to bear us well.
    Manfully, fearlessly,
    The day of trial bear,
    For gloriously, victoriously,
    Can courage quell despair !


    Charlotte Brontë

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